The seemingly “inconsistent” views in 1 Samuel 8-12 concerning Israel’s monarchy

The following was a short exegetical essay for Dr. Richard E. Averbeck’s Pentateuch and Historical Books course at Trinity Evangelical Divinity School.


As mentioned in the previous paper, an apparent tension exists between 1 Samuel 8’s negative appraisal of the people’s request for a king and the Pentateuch’s anticipation and prediction of such a king. This tension has unsurprisingly led many critical scholars, not only to claim an inconsistency between 1 Samuel 8 and the Pentateuch (above paper), but also within the chapters of 1 Samuel itself. In other words, these critical scholars have suggested the existence of different underlying traditions represented in 1 Samuel. These divergent traditions are supposedly responsible for the “inconsistent” opinions about the monarchy in 1 Samuel. This short paper will seek to wade through various opinions about this matter and provide an initial response.

Various “inconsistencies” within 1 Samuel’s appraisal of the monarchy are levied as evidence for distinct traditions with differing assessments of the monarchy. For example, different locations are provided for king-installment ceremonies (compare Gilgal in 11:15 to Mizpah in 10:17). Note also the seeming inconsistency between Samuel appointing Saul king in 9:1-10:16 and yet selecting him to be king via casting lots in 10:17-27 (Baldwin, 82). One might also add Samuel’s own mixed response (compare 8:6 with 10:24) as well as God’s motives (compare 8:7-9 with 9:15-16). Adding further difficulty is the fact that God apparently selected Saul (9:15-16). In other words, if God had planned the monarchy from the nation’s birth at Sinai, why did he not appoint a competent and godly king upon the people’s request, despite whether or not their own motives were pure? His choice of an ungodly and eventually unsuccessful King, Saul, calls into question the sincerity of God’s counter-reasoning—essentially, “He will be a bad king” (8:10-18)—against the people’s request. Baldwin suggests that the final editor allows each tradition to speak with its full voice, neither suppressing either tradition nor demonstrating a significant concern for harmonization as many modern Christians exhibit. Baldwin suggests this editor is concerned with providing a multitude of equally important complexity of perspectives that can address different situations and emphases (82-83). Howard, on the other hand, acknowledges that no problem confronts the evangelical by theoretically entertaining the possibility of multiple sources (cf. the self-attestation of scripture in this regard, e.g., 2 Sam 1:18; 1 Chron 29:29). Nonetheless, Howard concludes that such dichotomized source theories (i.e., absolute anti-monarchy v. absolute pro-monarchy) are rather blown out of proportion beyond what the actual data can justify (144).

In conclusion, it should be noted that a lack of uniformity does not mean a lack of consistency. Just because various portions of the narrative may derive from different sources, and just because they may create tensions within the narrative, does not necessitate the inclusion of inconsistencies and contradictions. Resolving every one of these tensions is beyond the scope of this paper; but as an example, one may note the above paper. In sum, the complexity of the narrative is likely purposeful in providing a variety of perspectives. However, one should not assume that any existence of such complexity requires inconsistency. In fact, one might rightly argue that the critical approach to biblical literature in this incident is far more complex and unnatural than the more straightforward approach of evangelical scholarship, despite its concession of tensions.

The tension between 1 Samuel 8’s negative perspective and the Pentateuch’s positive anticipation of the monarchy

The following was a short exegetical essay for Dr. Richard E. Averbeck’s Pentateuch and Historical Books course at Trinity Evangelical Divinity School.


Reflecting upon Israel’s history, God says in 1 Samuel 8:8, “As all of the deeds that they did from the day I brought them from Egypt until this day, they forsook me and served other gods.” As Bergen comments, “Against this backdrop, Israel’s demand for an earthly king is presented as merely the latest instance of their long-standing pattern of rejection” (116-117). However, on the other hand, Pentateuch texts such as Gen 17:6, 16; 35:11; 49:8-12; Num 24:7, 17; and Deut 17:14-20 provide a positive anticipation of the monarchy as part of God’s plan. In other words, an apparent tension exists between 1 Samuel 8’s negative appraisal of the people’s request for a king and the Pentateuch’s anticipation and prediction of such a king. How is it that both Samuel and God can be so opposed to the people’s request for a king when in fact God had predicted this request and installment of a king? This short paper seeks to answer this question.

McCarter helpfully notes that the people’s request was not merely concerned with military security. Certainly, this was a concern. With Samuel’s age (8:1), a new leader was obviously going to be needed. Yet Israel did not simply request a new leader, but a new institution or form of that leadership. And clearly, they see this Canaanite model of kingship (8:20) as a military advantage (8:20). This ambition was seemingly innocent in and of itself given the Pentateuch’s anticipation of a monarchy and God’s instruction to secure the land. But as McCarter notes, their ambition went further than this. “They are motivated by a perverse and self-destructive urge to rise above themselves” (160). In other words, McCarter understands the problem with this request as having to do with Israel’s discontentment with the adequate (cf. 7:2-17) pre-monarchial leadership institution established by YHWH and currently in place. Therefore, chapter 8 must be understood in light of the picture painted in chapter 7 (160). Rather than being content with what God had established for the time being, they sought to be “like all the nations” (8:20). “The people demand a king of Samuel because they want to be like the other nations; but this is precisely what they are not supposed to be” (McCarter, 160). Baldwin provides a paradoxical explanation stating, “Despite Israel’s apostasy in requesting a king, the Lord was positively at work to achieve his ultimate purpose” (84, cf. 87). Finally, one should observe that the perspectives represented in the Pentateuch’s anticipation of a king and 1 Samuel 8 are not all that different; in fact, they are quite similar in one sense. Whereas 1 Samuel 8 lists off the various upcoming offenses of this new king, Deuteronomy 17:14-17, for instance, provides restrictions that would prohibit such abuses. In other words, a Pentateuch passage like Deuteronomy 17 also holds to the view that kings tend to corrupt (McCarter, 162). Likewise, but contrastingly, Baldwin eases the tension by arguing that the Pentateuch shares 1 Samuel 8’s pessimistic view. He states that in Deuteronomy 17:14-15 “the desire to emulate other nations is foreseen and permitted, rather than approved” and that God “adapted his purposes and acquiesced sufficiently … even incorporating the monarchy into his revelation of himself to Israel [in the Pentateuch]” (84, emphasis mine). Therefore, for Baldwin, the tension is eased because for him there was really no tension in the first place; both passages are pessimistic.

In conclusion, one of YHWH’s concerns is that this king would claim prerogatives and rights that ought to belong solely to God alone as Israel’s ultimate king. In this vein of thought, it may be that this tension between God’s simultaneous desire and repulsion towards kingship is only truly resolved in the kingship of Christ, that human king who is simultaneously God, possesses the rights to such prerogatives, and executes His rule perfectly. At the same time, the people’s motives for requesting a king provide the surest exegetical explanation. Given these Pentateuch texts (above), God was certainly not against kingship per se. But, as McCarter pointed out, Israel wanted a king for sinful motivations. And contrary to Baldwin, Howard rightly affirms that “this desire flew in the face of the injunctions in Deuteronomy 17:14-20” (159). Consequently, this action was interpreted as a rejection of YHWH’s rule (8:7) because they did not desire his model of kingship.